hey pete
you should post your original stuff on here
i was just listening to it and i thought it was pretty good

way to impress rivers, dude! (:

The second one is more mature song writting. I especially like the Major to Minor drop right about 1:25 in. The first one is almost too predictable (is that the right word?) You rock though! Both are strong!

Excellent. Actually reminds me of Rivers' acoustic stuff infused with melodies, like Wanda a la VCD and such.

pretty good